tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.comments2015-12-01T11:47:18.633+08:00我們這一班Pablohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comBlogger149125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-87170956334235929112015-12-01T11:47:18.633+08:002015-12-01T11:47:18.633+08:00我回來了目前就讀海龍宮(簡稱海山高工)我回來了目前就讀海龍宮(簡稱海山高工)智鈞dicky嚇嚇叫https://www.blogger.com/profile/11268244204379305137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-69541954831773304682015-12-01T11:45:22.116+08:002015-12-01T11:45:22.116+08:00+11111111111111111111111111111111
+11111111111111111111111111111111<br />智鈞dicky嚇嚇叫https://www.blogger.com/profile/11268244204379305137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-20763578733178415082015-12-01T11:44:29.091+08:002015-12-01T11:44:29.091+08:00智鈞回來了智鈞回來了智鈞dicky嚇嚇叫https://www.blogger.com/profile/11268244204379305137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-1232910662598202442015-10-09T13:10:15.243+08:002015-10-09T13:10:15.243+08:00爛爛井上https://www.blogger.com/profile/15842862138572619587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-66675352995547095112015-10-09T13:10:14.258+08:002015-10-09T13:10:14.258+08:00爛爛井上https://www.blogger.com/profile/15842862138572619587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-31340379827966125332010-06-25T16:05:36.906+08:002010-06-25T16:05:36.906+08:00嗯嗯戰艦https://www.blogger.com/profile/00170098457143148386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-2132649318191609562010-01-06T14:27:02.852+08:002010-01-06T14:27:02.852+08:00「今天我和爸爸一起去看電影,我們要坐捷運去西門町的電影院看電影。」→「今天我和爸爸一起搭捷運去西門町...「今天我和爸爸一起去看電影,我們要坐捷運去西門町的電影院看電影。」→「今天我和爸爸一起搭捷運去西門町的電影院看電影。」<br />「票去」?<br />「由點」?<br /><br /><br /><br />評分:70<br />評語:請檢查及訂正。Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-18017889800297716102009-12-30T15:38:55.883+08:002009-12-30T15:38:55.883+08:00得分:75
評語:有錯字和標點符號錯誤。打完都不檢查嗎?得分:75<br />評語:有錯字和標點符號錯誤。打完都不檢查嗎?Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-2276558369393361552009-12-30T15:37:02.620+08:002009-12-30T15:37:02.620+08:00評分:70
評語:「浪費了1小時的時間打電腦」意思是一個小時都在打電腦還是一個小時都沒打到電腦?語意...評分:70<br />評語:「浪費了1小時的時間打電腦」意思是一個小時都在打電腦還是一個小時都沒打到電腦?語意不清。Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-38426623827225890762009-12-22T22:58:49.161+08:002009-12-22T22:58:49.161+08:00是我拉你去玩得,還抱著我緊緊的,很遜ㄝ。哈是我拉你去玩得,還抱著我緊緊的,很遜ㄝ。哈帝劍https://www.blogger.com/profile/09802883914727631535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-52932980231494908212009-12-22T15:03:22.488+08:002009-12-22T15:03:22.488+08:00得分:68
錯字:睡「得」著。
評語:希望下次能用心寫,不是只有應付而已。得分:68<br />錯字:睡「得」著。<br />評語:希望下次能用心寫,不是只有應付而已。Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-19155082527964426662009-12-21T18:39:09.523+08:002009-12-21T18:39:09.523+08:00得分:75
評語:最後一句,為什麼「快活」沒能描述出來。得分:75<br />評語:最後一句,為什麼「快活」沒能描述出來。Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-60569785647047872402009-12-21T18:36:28.181+08:002009-12-21T18:36:28.181+08:00得分:68
評語:要能「具體」描述。為什麼快瘋掉?為什麼飆淚?得分:68<br />評語:要能「具體」描述。為什麼快瘋掉?為什麼飆淚?Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-19188362575354771272009-11-30T18:14:17.128+08:002009-11-30T18:14:17.128+08:00得分:70-5(遲交扣分)
評語:要能寫出自己的心得喔!得分:70-5(遲交扣分)<br />評語:要能寫出自己的心得喔!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-24400972107341351492009-11-30T18:05:12.557+08:002009-11-30T18:05:12.557+08:00得分:78
評語:有些句子還不是很通順,錯別字要檢查啊!得分:78<br />評語:有些句子還不是很通順,錯別字要檢查啊!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-30997363518148015702009-11-30T18:02:04.548+08:002009-11-30T18:02:04.548+08:00得分:75
評語:內容不錯,要繼續保持喔!得分:75<br />評語:內容不錯,要繼續保持喔!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-29120303325530541132009-11-30T17:58:48.394+08:002009-11-30T17:58:48.394+08:00得分:75
評語:要學習正確的標點符號使用法,可以參考 http://www.edu.tw/file...得分:75<br />評語:要學習正確的標點符號使用法,可以參考 http://www.edu.tw/files/site_content/M0001/hau/haushou.htm#suoPablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-2814293689896912792009-11-25T15:02:06.898+08:002009-11-25T15:02:06.898+08:00得分:78
評語:「從快樂的星期日醒來」這樣的寫法不太容易令人理解。「用心去關心」也用得不恰當。不過...得分:78<br />評語:「從快樂的星期日醒來」這樣的寫法不太容易令人理解。「用心去關心」也用得不恰當。不過,嘗試各種不同的表達方式倒值得鼓勵。<br />回應:放假時做好時間規劃,確實檢查聯絡簿才能解決缺交功課的問題。Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-72299794893956896722009-10-01T21:59:07.371+08:002009-10-01T21:59:07.371+08:00所以...平時就要注意自己的身體啊~生病還會造成家人的負擔呢!沒關係啦~好好休息,讓自己快點好起來,...所以...平時就要注意自己的身體啊~生病還會造成家人的負擔呢!沒關係啦~好好休息,讓自己快點好起來,一個禮拜過去又是一條好漢啦!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-25383881103363137182009-07-18T11:38:58.485+08:002009-07-18T11:38:58.485+08:00請問要如何聯絡溫聖義
我是在一個教會英文營認識他的
我要給他照片
我手機0968562902
...請問要如何聯絡溫聖義<br /><br />我是在一個教會英文營認識他的<br /><br />我要給他照片<br /><br />我手機0968562902<br /><br />email:cakewei@yahoo.com.tw<br /><br />麻煩您小神人https://www.blogger.com/profile/03682066243212636515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-24401608587824605642009-06-26T17:23:45.667+08:002009-06-26T17:23:45.667+08:00工能 → 功能
樂不可知 → 樂不可支
那們 → 那麼
是啊,大家都能和平相處,多好啊!工能 → 功能<br />樂不可知 → 樂不可支<br />那們 → 那麼<br /><br />是啊,大家都能和平相處,多好啊!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-78829623489003051022009-06-23T17:13:49.970+08:002009-06-23T17:13:49.970+08:00同樂會萬歲同樂會萬歲帝劍https://www.blogger.com/profile/09802883914727631535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-73793225410951756872009-06-22T11:05:51.350+08:002009-06-22T11:05:51.350+08:00我們是可以來辦場「同樂會」,大家再討論看看吧!我們是可以來辦場「同樂會」,大家再討論看看吧!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-40973087808947963212009-06-22T11:04:40.781+08:002009-06-22T11:04:40.781+08:00是喔?原來你的生活被你的「分數」掌握著。試著「
掙脫」分數的枷鎖吧!是喔?原來你的生活被你的「分數」掌握著。試著「<br />掙脫」分數的枷鎖吧!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5732874591250798526.post-4025542093317200712009-06-12T22:47:20.267+08:002009-06-12T22:47:20.267+08:00謝謝智鈞提供的資訊,原來抓蜥蜴還可以賺錢啊!謝謝智鈞提供的資訊,原來抓蜥蜴還可以賺錢啊!Pablohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06501339311208600290noreply@blogger.com